Masih Ada Plan B: Musim hujan

Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Musim hujan

السلام عليكم

Sebijik bukan macam suara hamba.

Hari ini hari minggu. Ayah membawa kami ke pulau.

Di pulau ada ikan, pelangi, dan ada banyak tumbuh-

tumbuhan. Kakak dan adik pun bermandi di situ.

Kemudian kami mendengar petir. Hujan pun mula

turun. Kemudian kami cepat-cepat masuk dalam kereta.

Selepas itu jalan pula sesak. Jalan itu sesak dalam

keadaan hujan. Jalan itu sesak sampai pukul

8.00 malam. Hujan turun dengan lebatnya. Ayah saya

membawa kereta laju-laju untuk sampai ke rumah.

Apabila sampai di rumah hujan pun reda.

Moral cerita

Kita perlu rahmati hujan walau dia sejuk tetapi dia

rahmat Allah Subhanahu Wataala.

Yang benar,

Atiqah

Kebetulan sekarang ni musim hujan maka aku pun dengan pantas mahu kongsikan karangan Atiqah buat pakcik dan makcik kat luar sana tu. Kesian dekat jiran kita yang tenggelam dengan air banjir tu kan.

Pada yang perasan, dia dah gantikan "judul saya" kepada "moral cerita". Bagus kan budak² ni jenis mudah dengar nasihat dan teguran. Tak macam orang _ e _ a _ a. ;D

Dan aku rasa maksud dia pada ayat "Kita perlu rahmati" adalah "kita perlu menghargai". Sekian.

Lagi karpen (karangan pendek) Atiqah :

• Menjadi yang terbaik!

57 comments:

faryzh said... [Reply]: hahaha.comel lak baca karpen tu.ingatkan hasil kerja tangan ko.; October 12, 2011 at 1:23 AM
YouSOF said... [Reply]: Hahah.. ;D

Budak2 ni rajin kongsi cerita..; October 12, 2011 at 1:25 AM
anamizu said... [Reply]: hehe kiut je bunyi ayat die..

"Tak macam orang _ e _ a _ a"
APEKAH JAWAPANNYE??? :P

luv,
cik ana; October 12, 2011 at 1:32 AM
Azwa Mohamad said... [Reply]: best dengar cerita budak2... hahah, lebih2 lagi dengan mimik muka diorang; October 12, 2011 at 1:42 AM
YouSOF said... [Reply]: • anamizu > Hehe secomel orangnya.

Tak pasti la jawapannya. ;D

• Miz Novexx > Budak kecil ibarat terapi penghilang stress.. ;); October 12, 2011 at 2:03 AM
notaComeI said... [Reply]: Terimgat pulak karangan peperiksaan budak yang pernah keluar dekat internet dulu.; October 12, 2011 at 5:02 AM
adwafarahin said... [Reply]: hujan rahmat..terima kasih ya Allah :); October 12, 2011 at 7:37 AM
alin said... [Reply]: alololo..simple je citenye..

dah sampai rumah hujan pun reda..

saya pun masuk rumah,tido..kroih kroih..; October 12, 2011 at 8:32 AM
YouSOF said... [Reply]: • PANDACOMEI! > Hehe ni antara karangan baru la..

• adwafarahin > ;)

• ✿....rossa alina....✿> Budak kecil, simple dengan dimple.. ;D; October 12, 2011 at 10:09 AM
abyahuys said... [Reply]: alah sweetnye abg tulis karangan adek dlm blog~ >.<; October 12, 2011 at 11:03 AM
YouSOF said... [Reply]: Anak saudara sebenarnya.. ;); October 12, 2011 at 11:04 AM
Myra Arshad said... [Reply]: hujan tu kan rahmat :D; October 12, 2011 at 11:53 AM
CIK TOM said... [Reply]: tak macam siapa tue??hehe..
eh atiqah tue sape?comel je karangan dia..hujan tue rahmat dari Allah..; October 12, 2011 at 1:08 PM
::FAIZ:: said... [Reply]: aku suke hujan sbb sejuk. pastu kete aku tercuci dr taik burung... hehehe; October 12, 2011 at 1:11 PM
Nursyahira izzati Ngadimon said... [Reply]: heheee . bijakk iqa neyy . mudah mudahan dea jd org yg berjayaa ;)

SAYA SUKA musim HUJAN .
*buat tahik mata dlm rumah*; October 12, 2011 at 1:40 PM
K said... [Reply]: musim hujan untuk tido, hehe :P; October 12, 2011 at 1:46 PM
YouSOF said... [Reply]: • Myra Arshad (: > ;)

• CIK TOM > Takpelah, masing² dah tahu. ;D

Anak sedara yang banyak cakap.

• ::FAIZ FARISH:: > Heheh. Jimat air.

• Nursyahira > Aminnn.. ;)

Saya juga! ;D

• sergeant keroro > Juga untuk muhasabah diri.. ;); October 12, 2011 at 1:54 PM
Abu Bagi said... [Reply]: sapa yg buat entry ni sebenrnya..; October 12, 2011 at 2:06 PM
sayakayrulez said... [Reply]: berbakat atikah ni...!; October 12, 2011 at 2:27 PM
Unknown said... [Reply]: eh ingatkan penulisan sape tadi rupanya si cilik atiqah hehe hebat ! ;); October 12, 2011 at 2:28 PM
YouSOF said... [Reply]: • ABU > Karangan anak buah aku yang buat. Aku tolong pindahkan ke skrin maya ni je.. ;D

• khairul akmal bin azman > Hehe budak kecik ni rajin kongsi cerita..

• Amna.Qadeeja > ;D; October 12, 2011 at 4:16 PM
Rtp Farra Arisha said... [Reply]: pintarnya dia menulis essay pendek. salam to her yah! :); October 12, 2011 at 5:42 PM
Unknown said... [Reply]: hehehe..dah pandai dia buat karangan camtu..; October 12, 2011 at 5:49 PM
Anonymous said... [Reply]: budak2 pun dah pandai (:; October 12, 2011 at 6:52 PM
ariph™ said... [Reply]: yusof, aku ingatkan ni karangan ko. hahaha :D; October 12, 2011 at 7:55 PM
aQimie Ceplos said... [Reply]: simple. tp comel la weh :)
nak sign weh!! HAHAHAHAH; October 12, 2011 at 11:30 PM
wenk said... [Reply]: konfem dapat A nih; October 13, 2011 at 12:12 AM
Shila said... [Reply]: sikit2 lama jadi bukit..

aku ingat ko yg tulis..

baru nk puji ko comel..kekeke..; October 13, 2011 at 3:04 AM
Cik TeN10 said... [Reply]: comel je.. msa mula2 baca tu.. mcm pelik.. ehh.. kenapa comel sgt karangan ni.. rupa-rupanya krgn atiqah.. bagus la kl kecik-kecik dh tahu menghargai.. semoga dia menjadi insan yg berguna kelak.. :); October 13, 2011 at 8:32 AM
Syahirah Suhaili said... [Reply]: comel je baca karangan dia..hehe..adiela suke intro dia..ada ikan,pelangi dan byk tumbuh-tumbuhan..waaa..terimajin2 dah..kehkeh..len kali adiela nak ikot piknik lah :D; October 13, 2011 at 10:45 AM
kurus said... [Reply]: kalau ujan tidur sedap dik ! :); October 13, 2011 at 10:47 AM
BENA said... [Reply]: eh aku dah baca entry kau . tapi kenapa komen aku tak tinggal kan ye ? HAHAHAHA ;)

aku suka dengan anak buah kau . boleh jadikan anak buah angkat ? lalalala ;); October 13, 2011 at 11:32 AM
abyahuys said... [Reply]: oh! anak sedara.. okeh~ >.<
alahai baek nye pak cik die~ XD; October 13, 2011 at 12:02 PM
Ezad Skytech said... [Reply]: aq paling suka bila hujan ni..:); October 13, 2011 at 12:19 PM
miss sha said... [Reply]: saya suka hujan ! :) bessttt..; October 13, 2011 at 1:01 PM
Aleen Aiden said... [Reply]: selain drpd pulau langkawai,aku rase aku xpnah pegi pulau lain.

terase nak bagpacking pulak.; October 13, 2011 at 1:41 PM
nabilah_2908 said... [Reply]: comel je..siapa kah Atiqah ni..?; October 13, 2011 at 2:45 PM
najihah sahami said... [Reply]: haha..memang dirahmati betul la..xpe2.nanti besar boleh ganti a samad said nih. hehe; October 13, 2011 at 4:13 PM
alien said... [Reply]: aku dan hujan...
ada satu cerita, indah
hahaha..; October 13, 2011 at 4:47 PM
Anif Abdullah| AA said... [Reply]: haha.. cerdik budak tecik ni.. ^^; October 13, 2011 at 9:05 PM
anamizu said... [Reply]: YOU... takmo SANGAP² :P

luv,
cik ana; October 13, 2011 at 10:28 PM
lynda salim said... [Reply]: laaa .. budak kecik ke yang buat .....

*ingatkan usoff dah jadi cerpen writer ;p; October 13, 2011 at 10:59 PM
Izzaty Ishak said... [Reply]: Waaah bila lah zaty bole amik karangan sepupu jadikan entry ni. Hahaha.

Btw, lagu Hujan Malam Ini tuh memang favourite lah! Thanks jugak bagitau Zaty dulu :D; October 14, 2011 at 1:37 AM
ade2mama said... [Reply]: jom mandi hujannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn; October 14, 2011 at 5:38 AM
kehidupan said... [Reply]: hahaha... hujan o0o0 hujan....; October 14, 2011 at 8:41 AM
MOMMY CGG said... [Reply]: hujan..
sinonim ngan memory zaman kanak2 dan remaja dulu...:); October 14, 2011 at 9:33 AM
CikTeddyCorner said... [Reply]: siape die?adik?; October 14, 2011 at 12:43 PM
Izzaty Ishak said... [Reply]: Err komen Zaty semalam takde eh kat sini ?? :O

Usop, mintak satu karangan Atiqah. Zaty nak buat entry blog. Hahaha.

Btw, lagu Romancesa tuh dah macam favourite in playlist. Thanks jugak bagitau Zaty dulu ;); October 14, 2011 at 2:28 PM
dhiera zainudin said... [Reply]: bijak lah atiqah ni~; October 14, 2011 at 2:29 PM
Anonymous said... [Reply]: saya suka hujan sebab boleh mandi hujan; October 14, 2011 at 3:48 PM
Sarah Mohd Saleh said... [Reply]: aku ske ujan sbb asyukk kalau tdo.; October 15, 2011 at 12:36 AM
aiEz said... [Reply]: hujan satu rahmat,macam negara yg tak ada hujan ni mmg dorang nantikan sangat hujan ni...yg kita pulak negara sentiasa bsah dgn hujan,selalu mengeluh basah la itu semua...bersyukur,tiap kejadian ada hikmah sebaliknya...; October 15, 2011 at 1:05 AM
Alif Haris said... [Reply]: hujan = tido .. best :D hahaha
pekabau sop ? lama tak jumpa .. hihiks; October 15, 2011 at 3:07 AM
Anonymous said... [Reply]: Oh bagus btol Atiqah ni :D Nsib la kte budak2 lagi, haha perasan.; October 15, 2011 at 12:33 PM
♥ p a a n i ♥ said... [Reply]: suke hujan!!; October 16, 2011 at 4:14 AM
cik wanie Lovela (CWL) said... [Reply]: comel; October 16, 2011 at 5:52 PM
cik wanie Lovela (CWL) said... [Reply]: nak senyum lagi kad sini; October 18, 2011 at 11:55 PM

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